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Term 3 at AnimationMentor has come to an end!
Here is the dialogue shot as it stands now. There is still some polish I want to do. Unfortunately I was hit with a pretty heavy fever. Still trying to get over it. I'll be back in town on Sunday (family reunion), and cleaning up a lot of spacing/arc issues. There are some areas that need tlc too. As always, your feedback is appreciated.

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Hello again world!!
This pass has all the corrections from my last crit. I know that it sort of cuts on 'trouble,' I need to add a couple more poses =P I still need to work out the hands.
There are tons of areas I need to hit, any and all feedback you can give me is well appreciated!
Any movements that could be offset? Spacing/arc issues? Anything!

308 second pass

Here's what I've submitted this week. If you have any opinions, I would really like to hear them! Thanks!!