Friday, October 9, 2009
October 16th! I haven't been this excited about a movie in months, maybe years!! Actually, I have a feeling that my expectations are becoming preposterous. So I'm going to try forgetting about the film until the 16th hits. Wish me luck!
p.s. Let me know if you want to see a showing of it!
at 4:13 PM
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
Class 5 is done at AM, and my short film's story has been tied down for the most part. Above are the layouts for it (it isn't animated, just rough poses to define placement during the shots). Also, I think the audio sync may be off. Let me know how you think it's coming and, as always, anything that could be more clear or entertaining!
at 3:04 PM
Sunday, August 16, 2009
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
Dear World and all that inhabit it,
Here's a revision of the animatic, based on the feedback I received. Any thoughts?
I recently received notes telling me that the injured character in the beginning gives away the ending, and that the ending is anti-climatic. I agree with both comments and plan to make adjustments as soon as I think of something better!
Your wisdom is always appreciated!
at 12:58 PM
Friday, August 7, 2009
So this is the current animatic for my short film. I would really appreciate any and all feedback! 'Looking good' comments are appreciated, but I would really like to hear ways of cutting out the garbage.
I have a couple of concerns. One is the jester is not introduced in a way that we can feel for him immediately. The other huge issue is that not everyone gets the payoff.
Soooo, hopefully somebody is reading this! =)
at 5:05 PM