Wednesday, August 12, 2009

short film animatic, 2

Dear World and all that inhabit it,
Here's a revision of the animatic, based on the feedback I received. Any thoughts?

I recently received notes telling me that the injured character in the beginning gives away the ending, and that the ending is anti-climatic. I agree with both comments and plan to make adjustments as soon as I think of something better!

Your wisdom is always appreciated!

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