Wednesday, August 12, 2009
short film animatic, 2
Dear World and all that inhabit it,
Here's a revision of the animatic, based on the feedback I received. Any thoughts?
I recently received notes telling me that the injured character in the beginning gives away the ending, and that the ending is anti-climatic. I agree with both comments and plan to make adjustments as soon as I think of something better!
Your wisdom is always appreciated!
at 12:58 PM