308 fresh start

What's up World!

So here is another pass at the same dialogue. After talking to my mentor (Mike Stern), I changed the scenario. He told me it was a good blocking pass and the acting was nice, but character relationship (person talking vs. person talking to) did not fit. Basically he was saying, which is realistic: to be physically threatened by a person at work or customer at a convenient store?
That said, I'm redoing my blocking and this is what I have so far. I need a couple more poses to hit all the major accents, but hopefully it is reading! It's all still quite rough, so any comments you have would be great!
(I started modeling some of the set. The rest will have to get done at a later point)